First Draft of article attempt. (Please do not copy)

I felt that this draft is too personal, and I did not want to share it on a blog where practically anyone in the world could read it. It was an ok attempt, but needed lots of improvement and more focus on the genre, purpose and audience to make it more clear to the readers'. I have now improved the piece and completed a final draft of it which is a lot better than this first draft that I did in my opinion as I found a good style model, and I stuck better to the purpose, audience and genre than I did in my first draft. :)